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Dear Sir,
I have pleasure in enclosing my latest C.V., as mentioned in our recent telephone conversation.
I should be obliged if you would kindly forward this to any vacancies for Material Inspector in Qatar, Oman, Saudi Arabia and or Bahrain in m/s (company name) .
Thank you in advance,
Yours faithfully,
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Dear Sir,
I refer to our recent telephone conversation in regard to my applying for a position as a Material Inspector.
As arranged, please find a faxed copy of my Curriculum Vitae (C.V.) attached.
I would very much appreciate your forwarding a copy of my C.V. to any known vacancies for the position in Qatar, Oman, Saudi Arabia and or Bahrain in m/s {company name} .
If you have any questions in regard to this matter, please do not hesitate to contact me on {contact numbers}.
Thanking you in advance,
Yours faithfully
(ISHA)